just generally you want to end your scenes you know you want to break your scene on some kind of a hook you know something that makes readers curious about what's going to happen and this doesn't have to be a big deal it doesn't have to be a you know a jump scare or something where it's like oh my gosh I didn't see that coming you know plot twist or whatever um every single scene Break um but just something again where they're just curious how the characters are going to respond you know something big has happened
and that's actually a really good place to end because that means that some that there's going to be reactions and consequences to sort through and it's very interesting and really that's what pulls rer forward to find out how characters are going to react to things but generally speaking you just want to make sure there's some kind of a hook that leads into the next section um the best way to think of a hook in my opinion is just as a question and it doesn't have to be an explicit literal question but it's something that gets
readers wondering right it's like it's it's a loose end it's like we don't know what's going to happen here we don't know how the character is going to react
