i see a lot of videos on youtube that talk about how to craft a plot twist they talk about how a good plot twist needs to be believable within the logic established or how you need to give the audience all the pieces of the puzzle so they would be able to figure out the answer on their own even though these are valid characteristics of a good plot twist none of them get to the core of what makes a truly meaningful twist or more importantly why a writer should even consider having a plot twist in their
story today i want to talk about how to build not only an interesting plot twist but a meaningful one and how you can integrate meaningful plot twists into your screenplay let's begin i believe there is a very clear and structural method a writer can follow to ensure that they have a relevant twist that will impact their audience this method stems from one simple definition a meaningful plot twist should be a significant shift in the audience's perception of the philosophical conflict let me elaborate remember how the best stories have three sets of stakes the external stakes
the internal stakes and the philosophical stakes following this logic we can see how a twist should be constructed for a meaningful twist we need an external shift an internal shift and a philosophical shift an external shift is when we rearrange plot elements in a way that is unexpected these are surprises happening to external elements of the story such as characters finding a hidden passage someone suddenly dying or an identity reveal it has nothing to do with character beliefs or the philosophical conflict just the plot an internal shift has to do with the emotion the audience
feels how they go from feeling peace to being hit with an event that shocks them or how they go from a state of depression to a state of hope these emotional shifts must be clear and should not leave the audience confused a philosophical shift is a significant change in how the audience perceives the theme of the story they go from seeing a certain philosophical belief as being the correct or stronger one to realizing that this belief is flawed or weak this is where a lot of writers fall short when crafting their twist they end up
applying one or two of these layers but not all three of them this creates twists that are not memorable and not as impactful as they could be let's look at some of the different twists and see how the three layers of stakes apply first let us look at a twist that has an external shift but no internal or philosophical conflict let's look at the midpoint shift in brave until this point the story has shown a philosophical conflict of rebellion represented by merida and tradition represented by her mother their conflict escalates until merida gets advice from
a witch to change her mother's views she gets a magic pie which is said to change her fate merida gives the pie to her mother but unexpectedly it turns her into a bear this is an external shift the pie will change merida's fate the pie turns her mother into a bear the problem with the twist is that it does not play with our emotions in a clear way it is true that it subverts our expectations but it leaves its audience confused as to why this would happen and how we should even feel about it in
regards to the internal shift we go from anticipation to nothing the twist is confusing if the audience is confused they cannot have a clear emotional shift in regards to the philosophical conflict we go from merida wanting to rebel and her mother wanting to stay in the tradition to that same idea the philosophical conflict between merida and her mother remains intact her mother turning into a bear has no impact on how we perceive their views on rebellion or tradition by solely shifting the external elements the movie creates merely a gotcha moment it's a cheap magic trick
they rearrange plot elements in a surprising way ultimately it is meaningless since its confusion leaves no lasting emotional impact or change in the philosophical conflict next a twist with an external shift and an internal shift but no philosophical shift let's look at the twist in big hero 6. professor callahan until this point the writers attempted to convince the audience that the man behind the kabuki mask was ceo alistair cray at the end of the second act hiro and his gang find out that the bad guy is actually professor callahan he was responsible for tadashi's death
and has been assembling his master plan ever since so the external shift is that tadashi was killed by a fire and now tadashi was killed by his mentor the internal shift is that hiro is frustrated to hero feels betrayed however one of the reasons the twist falls short is because it does nothing to change our perception of the philosophical conflict in regards to the philosophical shift we have death hurts people to death hurts people we just see yet again a case of a character driven by the death of a loved one to take extreme actions
only confirming what the characters and the audience already knew you might say this is a bad twist because it's too predictable or contrived and you would not be wrong but the core issue is that the twist does not challenge our view of the philosophical conflict now let's look at a twist that shifts all three layers let's look at one of the greatest twists of all time darth vader is luke's father is it a memorable twist because it's unexpected or because it's a quotable line maybe but it may really be because it perfectly shifts the three
storytelling layers the external shift is luke's father is dead to luke's father is alive and is luke's biggest antagonist the internal shift is luke holding on to hope to now holding despair the philosophical shift is that good is going to defeat evil to evil and darkness are clearly more powerful and this last shift is the reason this twist has resonated with so many people until that point star wars had been a battle of good guys versus bad guys represented by the light and dark sides and we had been reinforced to believe that the light side
would ultimately defeat the dark side so when we see that luke's father the hero of the light side has been responsible for such atrocities and that luke is also capable of doing the same we have our previously held beliefs shattered it shows us that the dark side is truly powerful maybe even more powerful than good if you only knew the power of the dark side here is another example of a twist that shifts all three layers the midpoint twist and parasite up until this point the story had been a battle of wits between the poor
and the rich represented by the kims conning their way into the park residency however after the kim family has gotten everything they wanted they discovered that the old housekeeper has a secret bunker in the mansion housing an even poorer family this sparks a battle between the two poor families as they struggle for control over the parks the external shift is that the kims control the house to now they lose their power when there is a secret bunker housing an even poorer family the internal shift is the kim's state of peace to their state of pure
panic and the philosophical shift goes from being a class struggle between the poor and the rich to the real class struggle being between the poor and the poorer bong joon ho uses the twist to show clash struggle in south korea as a bucket full of crabs where the villain is not the rich but instead the poor people who fight to keep each other miserable meanwhile the rich remain completely unaware of the situation as represented by the secret bunker with this you know the basic elements that separate great twists from mediocre ones but the question still
remains why even have a plot twist to begin with what is the point of a plot twist why should you consider implementing a twist into your story is it simply to shock the reader is it simply so you can brag about how smart you are because you masterfully deceived the audience no instead i want you to look back at the moments in your life moments that defined you single events that affected the beliefs you hold making you question them maybe a sudden death of a loved one made you rethink your life goals maybe a breakup
made you re-examine what it means to love or the loss of a job made you re-evaluate the importance of money and happiness in life we come across single events that significantly shift our beliefs and this is what twists are for they mimic shifts in life that we all go through these are external events that left a deep emotional impact on you and thus changed your beliefs about life external shift internal shift and philosophical shift this is why changing the philosophical layer is so crucial i'm not saying that twists that only have external or internal shifts
are inherently bad they can actually be useful tools to keep a story interesting and moving forward however i am saying that they will never be as impactful to an audience as a twist that hits an external internal and philosophical layer so next time you're attempting to write a plot twist first stop and ask yourself why are you doing this what does your twist say about life and how it should be lived and next ensure that you have a meaningful twist that causes an external internal and philosophical shift are you a writer who's struggling to consistently
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