[Music] all right so we're doing another lead example um let's see what do we want to do next here how about one for Law of Attraction why not let's do that I move my face back to over here again so this is a law of traction offer I wrote during my lion publishing days um I don't think that this offer ended up really crushing it but I also don't know how much it saw the light of day to be completely honest with you cuz with me promoting so many offers for these guys it was kind
of like not promoting but writing um it was kind of like some of this stuff um would get tested on like a few hundred clicks and if it didn't immediately smash they would just kind of put it to the side and not come back to it it uh but there's some elements I really like in this lead but there's also some things where I kind of wonder about changes I could have made as well so what I'm going to do we'll go through the lead here uh you notice the last lead was was 500ish words
this one 772 none of these leads are going to be super long um and yet you know for the most part everything these examples I'm sharing a lot of them did extremely well and so it's kind of just a good of that you don't need to like the least shouldn't be 2,000 words in fact a lot of them uh can really just be a couple hundred words or whatever so anyway this one here um let's just read it and then we'll come back and we'll kind of talk about what I like about it and where
it matches up with this and everything like that right so what if I told you that there was a secret code hidden deep inside Einstein's theory of relativity and that once you discover it you can have literally anything in the universe you want I really really do mean anything total Financial Security so that you never again get mailbox anxiety because you're afraid of the bills you might find inside or pass Relentless nights wondering where the money will come from after being ambushed by a surprise expense you simply can't afford to pay stronger more deeply rewarding
relationships with your friends family and romantic partner and perfect perfect health for decades to come both for yourself and all those you love it might sound unbelievable but there are more than 14,000 people across America experiencing these exact things at this very moment and even more profoundly they were doing it using a hidden and bizarre power something that famous physicist and mathematician Albert Einstein identified more than a century ago and that he claimed was the key to all his success in success in life hi my name is Luke Bernard and the next 5 minutes I'm
going to give you the incredibly powerful but long supressed secret to obtain anything you want in this world whether there it's material something like a beautiful vacation home on the beach a meticulously well-appointed luxury sedan that's so new you feel Intoxicated by the smell of fine leather every time you open the driver's side door or just a peace of mind that comes from knowing you have more money coming in than you can possibly spend and that all your financial needs will be forever taken care of or whether it's emotional like the feeling of total well-being
and inner peace when you wake up every morning of never again struggling with feelings of depression or anxiety of never again worrying about the events in life that used to be out of your control or whether it's spiritual something as profound as enjoying a deep connection with both God and the Unseen but clearly present power that fills our universe or even if it's all the above in a lot of ways the staggeringly powerful mind harnessing technique I'm about to teach you is the missing ingredient to what's commonly known as The Law of Attraction it's a
part that the creators of the secret purposely left out and that virtually every other positive thinking Guru still doesn't want you to know about they want you to fail because the more you struggle to truly manifest the things in your life that you desire the more you'll keep buying their books their CDs and tickets to their trainings and seminars now I know it's a strong charge but I'll give you the damning proof for that claim right inside this video in fact that's really what this short but highly controversial presentation you're now watching watching is all
about proof proof that your mind is exponentially more powerful than you've ever imagined proof that it can bring you more wealth greater Health stronger relationships and more spiritual fulfillment than you ever thought possible and proof that all it takes to harness this power inside your mind is your commitment to spend about 7 minutes per day performing a certain set of simple mental actions things that anyone of any age can do in which I'll describe to you in explicit detail in just a second before I do that however there's one extremely important thing you need to
understand the secret mind techniques I'm about to give you will create a Vortex something that sucks up everything in existence you want and then gently drops it at your front door but please understand this is not based on positive thinking it's also not based on the power of intention or even an abundance mentality it's certainly not based on the principles you learned in the secret or even on the law of of attraction at least on the form that you're familiar with instead what you're about to be shown is based on a fundamentally basic principle in
modern physics something that Albert Einstein both identified and used himself in order to achieve unimaginable wealth and fame while contributing to the betterment of humanity and that he so beautifully summed up when he wrote in his private Journal that imagination is everything it is a preview of life's Coming Attractions okay so are you ready to discover exactly what the secret life-changing method is then let's get started like I just mentioned my name is Luke Bernard I'm 41 years old and live just outside Rally North Carolina all right so a lot going on here um I
generally don't like starting leaves with questions I I don't like the whole like uh if or you know like are you always feeling tired of that or what if I could told you uh so I did it in this case but like it's not if I was going to go back and write this again I don't know if I would start off a question on it uh I I like the idea of a secret code in deep inside Einstein's theory of relativity I like this stuff right about not getting mailbox anxiety because you're afraid of
the bills you might find inside or are passing restless nights wondering where the money will come from after being ambushed by a surprise expense you can't simply or you simply can't afford I think that stuff's pretty like real uh I like this stuff and I'm saying a lot I like this stuff I wonder about you know with the friends family and romantic partner the one thing there is like what if they don't have a romantic partner and that's what they really want which is actually pretty common with Law of Attraction stuff so I wonder if
maybe I I could have called that out better here perfect health for decades to come it's a strong claim but it's okay 14,000 people across America is going to be some of the credibility we'll come back to this in a minute the Einstein stuff is kind of interesting this whether it's material whether it's emotional whether it's spiritual is good the flow is a little weird I like the painting the picture going back to like not not saying like a new car but like a meticulously well-appointed luxury sedan that's so new you feel Intoxicated by the
smell of fine leather every time you open the driver side door right that's way better than get a new car um I could have done the same thing with a beautiful vacation home on the beach right it's like I could have done something like um Beach like where you leave the windows open each night in the warm tropical salty air you know caresses you in the morning as you wake I mean you could just take it a level deeper and I frankly that would make it better I think uh so I mean same thing with
the emotional and spiritual stuff this idea here I really like this of um what I'm about to teach you is a missing ingredient to what's commonly known as the law of attraction I kind of Wonder and then well this part about it's the part that the creators of the secret purposely left out I I think those two things I don't know if they've been done before and again this was written back in 2014 or so these two might have been better hooks than the Albert Einstein hook it may have been better if the Albert Einstein
thing was a secondary hook but the big thing was like you know maybe like if you've ever seen the secret you probably know that it didn't get what you what you wanted and the reason why has to do with this one part which is like the the the secret chapter the one part that they left out um but don't worry it's not you know from until now it's been hidden from the rest of the road but today that changes um you know this is a little harsh if they want you to fail but interesting uh
so but I just think these ones could have maybe been better hooks or things to play with and lend themselves to good headlines the Einstein stuff was interesting to me and I love that quot quot from Einstein later on about how he's using attraction but I yeah that's something I'm thinking about here the stuff here about going to come back up here the staggeringly powerful mind harnessing technique I'm about to I don't mind harnessing technique is like kind of I don't think I don't think that adds anything I think anything think it it increases confusion
so if I was going to redo this today I probably would not have use mind harnessing technique I say in a lot of ways what I'm about to show you or what I'm about to teach you kept it Blinder I don't think I needed mind harnessing technique in there I could have kept it Blinder the copy is what I'm saying and then you know all the proof um all you need to do is commit about some per day performing a certain set of simple mental actions things that anyone of any age can do I feel
like I don't even need that for this one I think again it could have been Blinder yeah is your commitment to spend about 7 minutes per day um concentrating at at least 50 giving concentrating at least 50% or saying like I think maybe that would have been better than a certain set of simple mental actions it's kind of Broad and vague so I don't know if that is really needed I love this idea of like the secret mind techniques I'm about to give you will create a Vortex something that sucks up everything in existence you
want and then gently drops at it front at your front door I think this is a great copy um like maybe could have been used put up a little bit higher and then of course the contrarian stuff right this is not positive thinking power of intention even abundance mentality it's not based on what you learned in the secret or even the Law of Attraction um it's based on a fundamental principle of modern physics something that Einstein identified and used himself see I think this is good but this is probably where Einstein could have come in
here I don't know if I needed Einstein all the way up as like the main hook versus this the missing thing the one thing that they people who wrote The Secret didn't tell you or the one part that nobody ever tells you about the law of attraction or something I think that could have potentially been a more interesting hook but if you go to all right going back to the outline call out the problem um scroll down here I mean oh duh right well here we're making promises but really CAU out the problem too with
the mailbox anxiety restless nights wor about where the money will come from things like that promising solution you definitely you know having anything in the universe you want stronger deeper all of this stuff is probably the solution so we have plenty of that going on we don't tease an emotional Discovery story and probably we tease Albert Einstein's Discovery but it's not emotional I wonder if you know teasing the speaker Luke's story may have been uh may have improved things teasing unique mechanism we definitely do that with the Einstein stuff in physics and kind of like
um a hidden power something that Einstein identified contrary in nature we do do that we talk about all the things that it's not right not based on this not based on this not based on this Fascinations I mean maybe I not in the classic sense but you know the stuff about what Einstein um kind of used is kind of a good Fascination there addressing skepticism yeah we do that a couple times obviously there the 14,000 people um have used it I'm going to give you proof um so yeah we we just skepticism credibility Builders you
know Albert Einstein I guess 14,000 people who this works for yeah we do like mean you know no matter what you want whether it's emotional or physical or spiritual and we don't have testimonials on this one and then right after that again comes right into the background story who am I right like my name is l so yeah I don't know I think there's some cool stuff in this one but I can see where I could have made it better with the advantage of I mean six years of hindsight so hopefully uh that's instructive to
you and let me uh let me move on to yet another [Music] one