but now as we venture deeper into the story to the first pinch point the threat from without intensifies the Invaders whatever it is that threatens the domestic World push Harder They breach a boundary what would that be in your story perhaps here you can just imagine your character and their followers standing in an open area somewhere where and suddenly you hear alarms perhaps literally Sirens or claxons or perhaps it's just the sound of distressed people shouting in fear or anger perhaps someone is banging on the door or one of your character's followers rushes in to
bring news what do you see