Salamikum everyone. My name is Sima and I'm studying in uh Soul National University of Science and Technology. Uh my major is applied artificial intelligence and I'm a GPS candidate from 2023.
So in this video I'm going to share my statement of purpose that I wrote um one year back in 2023. So um it will help you to uh just uh create a structure. It's like a basic structure that I uh made for my statement of purpose.
I will show you by paragraph by paragraph how to write it and I will give you exemplary my my statement of purpose. um as a example please don't copy it because they know they know that you copy from somewhere like they all know so yeah let's get started I will if if you like this video please share now and uh subscribe it and share with your friends so statement of purpose is like um okay in the starting paragraph just uh you need For the opening paragraph, you need to write something which is uh which which can attract the reader that what you write. So in the first paragraph that I write, I will put uh the uh down picture that what I wrote and what's the main thing in my statement of purpose as a so I will read my uh statement of purpose but please please I request you please don't copy it.
Please don't copy it. I'm just sharing for the sake of like for you guys because I receive a lot of messages how to write, how to I'm just sharing with you like I just example of my statement of purpose just take an idea don't copy it. If you copy it, it I don't think so that it will like good for you to copy whole thing.
So yeah, I will start my um the reading. Uh as the old ages in the first paragraph I just open the opening lines was like as the old ages goes if you think education is expensive try ignorance and I wholeheartedly agree with this statement. As an individual who values datadriven insight and evidence-based theories, I recognize that education is an indispensable tool for unlocking the full potential of my ideas and transforming them into tangible solution.
In fact, it is the ability to bridge the gap between knowledge and application that set apart truly exceptional professional professionals from the rest. So it's like first paragraph I just write I just started with the quote like if you think education is expensive try ignorance like just add opening line lines with with some quote or anything that that connects you that connects you with your field or uh whatever you feel and connects your passion which shows your passions and like After much introspection, I have reached that conclusion of pursuing a master degree in applied artificial intelligence is the next logical step towards the realizing my professional ambition. With a solid academic background and a keen interest in cutting edge topics, I aspire to embark on research career as a distinguished faculty member or a vulnerable asset to a reputable international organization research and development department.
To achieve this, it is imperative for me to enhance my skills and expertise through post-graduate education and a master degree from the esteemed soul national university of science and technology would pro provide me with the necessary knowledge and training to thrive. So in this paragraph I just give a how to say I just give a introduction that why I am into this university and why I am to this department particular department that I selected. So in the next paragraph like you have to introduce yourself who you are what you studied um uh like what's your major and all that.
So in this paragraph like I write it I'm proud I'm proud to have earned a bachelor degree in electrical engineering that your whatever your major is with exceptional distinction graduating as a top performing student with CGPA you have to mention your GPA if it's good if you think like your GPA 3. 5 above then please mention your GPA with a bold like that with the bold color okay uh with the dark if your GPA is good you think like 3. 5 above or 3.
8 day 3. 9 out of four. So bullet during my final year I worked on a cutting edge project that involved developing a computer vision product capable of detecting hand gesture and controlling a 3D video display.
This project allowed me to showcase my skill and knowledge in the field. I'm excited about the potential and techn Okay. In this paragraph, I just uh I just mention uh who I am like my department, what what was my major in bachelor's uh what my CGPA and what I did in my project like FIP final year project or anything that I my thesis in in in bachelors.
So I just mention in this paragraph like a short paragraph just to uh mention who you are. In the next paragraph I uh I mention like why South Korea because I did internship in Huawei. So uh because of Huawei I have in I have uh intro some Samsung and their technology.
So that's why I choose Korea and this particular applied AI department. So these are my reasons my give your reasons in the next paragraph just your reasons like why why you need why you are selecting South Korea why are you selecting this department just link the next paragraph from the pre previous in previous paragraph I mentioned my project that I did in bachelor's now from that project I connect my next paragraph that why I I wanted to do the this master degree in this particular um department so that I connect my bachelor and master um field by explaining like that. Okay, I will read whatever primary reason uh that drew me apply for master's program in South Korea is a country worldrenown repetition of for pioneering edge technology and research particularly in the field of applied artificial intelligence.
Having grown grown up using Samsung smartphone and LG television, I've been inspired by the intricity uh the quality for of product that have come from South Korea tech industry. So I just mention like I I just I just pick a story like from like from childhood we we were using in Samsung and LG products but so why why South Korea? because I'm and it's a reality just speak true things uh that I am inspired by the technology of South Korea like this then I mention that I did uh in yeah I did mention then my um uh my internships that I did in seeds future program uh that was by Huawei Technologies China.
So uh which which was the courses in that I took was related to my AI field uh for for like signal processing and all that. So you need you need to give like it's a simple paragraph explaining don't go like beyond don't use like more don't go complex just use u simple things to just connect your field with South Korea. Yeah, if you are like from arts field or you're like from like you are a actor or you are like a dancer you you wanted to come from that background just connect with your K-pop and all that but don't know everybody okay what's your inspiration to study in the South Korea just add that so so this is conclude conclusion of my first page so I just read my first page and I think one and half page is enough.
This is my second page. 1 and half page is enough for you. Like don't lengthe it.
One and a half. One or two. Yeah, that's that's enough.
Okay. Okay. The next one throughout my undergraduate degrees now I'm just giving a touch of my undergraduate that how was as a student how how was I a student in the undergraduate just to throughout my undergraduate years I had a privilege of building positive relation with my professors and peers was an active participant in a wide range of extracurricular activities.
These experiences taught me invaluable skills such as time management, critical thinking, problem solving, budgeting and communication. I even took the responsibility of organizing the various picnic seminars. What actually in this paragraphs what you did in your past degree in past life, what you learned from your uh past.
So it's it's just I I actually did some seminars, some uh some projects, some with groups. So I just included that what I learned from that budgeting, communication, problem solving, critical thinking, time management, all of that you have to like good relation with with professors with like with your classmate with your group that it shows that you have a ability to do work in a team. So because obviously when you go in a master and like when you do project in in labs you you you you do in a in a form of group in the form of team.
So it it shows that um you have any experience before. So yeah as I next paragraph as I embark on the next chapter of academic journey I'm eager to continue pursuing my research interest in master program with the support of prestigious global Korea scholarship. My focus will be uh will be on researching emerging fields that both economically and environment is sustainable.
Some may believe that that scholarship are intended solely for the student in dire financial need. But strongly I strongly disagree. Winning a scholarship is a significant achievement and it's it is a testament a testament to one's hard work and dedication.
Thousand of student apply for these scholarship and it takes a great deal of a confident and determination to pursue one's goal and succeed in such a competitive environment. As a student, I recognize the importance of for fostering prosperous relationship between Pakistan and South Korea and I believe that pursuing my academic and research goals is an essential step towards promoting positive development in both countries. Uh defining in statement of purpose if you're writing something then prove them.
Prove them how? by your certificates, by your what you do. I did internships.
I have a lot of certificates of actually I uh you I I I post um video the last video my documents my GKS documents. So prove it by your documents that you are eligible and then write it then why I am eligible for this scholarship and what the and what and being a GS scholar how it will be the benefit for Korea or Pakistan and how the uh relationship uh will how the relationship affect to the both countries. So you need to define yourself and the um like yourself that how you are eligible the in the simple words like why you need to get this scholarship just show it and the next paragraph I uh I'm just ending it's a conclusion road can be challenging I see it's a wonderful opportunity to burden to broaden my horizon and gain new experiences like in a positive way.
Many of my seniors who have studied in South Korea speak highly of the country, rich culture, welcoming people and outstanding facilities for international students. They have not only received a top-notch education but also developed leadership abilities, self confidence and self-awareness among the valuable. Okay.
And in this paragraph I just mention like how will be how I'm expecting my foreign life there in South Korea because the South Korea have a good um uh country culture people are good so just you have to like little praising thing uh with closing like uh I I am going to believe them that I have I have a support of my family that I can apply I as a as a foreigner student I can come so I have a support of my family I have a support of my friends so there's no any restriction because in in in some cases the girls are not allowed to study abroad or in study abroad so sometimes it it it's good to show you that fortunately my family is u supportive and supportive of my decision to pursue this program. I'm eager to enhance my core competences uh through this unique opportunity. Upon completing my international degree, I plan to return to my home country and use my new found knowledge and skills to serve my community.
I'm excited to embrace all the challenges and opportunity that lie ahead. So this is what this was my closing in which I just show that after my future my future um plans like after study uh after study my degree I will come back to my country and serve um my country my community. So yeah that was my statement of purpose in you need to focus some points.
The first point is like opening how you open and uh after then how you close what is the conclusion of your all and uh and then what what is the connection between your degree your previous degree and your upcoming degree. If you are masters, if you're bachelor's and you are going to the masters, how it connects? If you are like undergraduate, then I think there's no need to connect because we just do engineering or medical thing.
There's no wide thing for connecting. So just you need to mention what's your plans why why actually you choose Korea and uh how it will benefit to you how it will benefit to your country and what hardship are you face will you face in in this country and how you can overcome and your motivation actually what is your motivation my motivation was my field applied artificial intelligence and my bachelor field my motivation my research my motivation was my um uh my internship that I connected with Huawei technologies from China that's why I I wanted my motivation was like uh Samsung and all LG and all um the best technology tech tech companies in the South Korea that was my motivation so just explain yourself and connect yourself with your um with your field and express yourself that yeah you you you have an ability to come and to get this scholarship just to statement of purpose is nothing just to define yourself in a proper way. Okay.
So yeah, if you like this video, uh please like and um share with your friends and please guys subscribe if if I upload the coming next video. you you you need to see the because in September this is September uh 2024 and you guys uh from February coming February February 2025 again GK scholarship will open for master degrees so yeah apply for that okay that's all from my side so uh statement of purpose this if you like Please share, please subscribe and like. Okay, bye-bye.
Next video will be like about my brief study plan. Undergraduate student I think don't need. Master student also don't need but I did.
I submitted my study plan because okay I will share in the next video.
