hello everyone I hope you're doing well one of the biggest mistakes you students usually commit when it comes to academic writing is they think it's about what they write it's they think it's about the content so if I just mention mention the answer then I'm doing great usually when it comes to academic writing it is more than that it's sometimes about how to say it and trust me sometimes like the smallest mistake can really cause a huge problem when it comes to your essay and for this I want to share with you this question and
in the same time I want to share with you the answer okay the question here is to be accepted as members in the academic community in which the big entry would be academics demonstrate a master of standard forms of appropriate in someone else work or idas discuss the statement both in a coherent essay now what I want you to do I want you to read carefully the introduction I have proposed and I want you to pause the video and read it and Trust me there is a big mistake when it comes to this uh introduction
so read it carefully and try to tell me what's the mistake in the comments in the comment section so pause the video read it take your time and then come and say what do you think is the mistake and after that we will talk okay I think by now maybe you have done it maybe you have read read the state or you read the answer several times and I hope you have shared your opinion about it so first let's discuss the question and let's discuss what I have written here so the question is simply to
be accepted on members in academic so you be part of Academia what you need you need to demonstrate Mastery of standard so okay so we have Mastery of standard forms so what do you need you really need to master some standard forms so the this is so important here standard forms of appropriating someone else work appropriating someone else we take someone else these this important discuss the statement so discuss means that we are going to talk about about a lot of points okay so usually the very first sentence what I do it's like I talk
about what's the reason behind like talking about this idea as a whole so what what I wrote here research is built on the foundation of what others have discovered so it's like we always need to site we need to talk about others work so this is important it is the culmination of existing knowledge continuous inquiry and new insight so this is like a corner it comes it's really kind of a let's say one of the pillars in academic in Academia that you need to to use others work okay this is good but there is a
problem what's the problem when you take someone else work so taking someone else idas research writing or creative output so this kind of list what you can take you can take someone else ideas you can take writing or creative output output necessitate adhering to certain guidelines okay what are these guidelines so what the researcher has to do has to size properly this is one has to paraphrase correctly and number three seek permission and then acknowledge collaborative efforts and of course number five follow ethical standard of each field so this is kind of a the thesis
statement these are the standards that we you need to adhere to good everything seems good here failing to meet the letter would what violate integ with would Viola academic integrity and can lead to Serious repercussion in both academic and professional context resulting in what loss of trust legal issues reputation damage and plagiarism now so far you may agree that it is perfect you may think that my style is good unless you have another problem that you you think it is there but let me tell you something first one I see my students usually provide kind
of a list same answer usually my question is what's the logic behind the ordering of the list and this is very important remember with me when you provide the list always ask yourself what's the logic behind that order in the list so if I start with however taking someone else IDs this is what research writing creat so we take someone else IDs Point number one or we they're writing directly or creative output so it's kind of a general adhering necessitate adhering to certain guidelines so this is a list here researcher has to what properly has
to site so if I say that sighting is with taking someone else IDs that's sighting so we see this idea is with this idea and paraphrase correctly that if I'm going to take their writing although this list you can say they are linked but not that much because you can change the order and seek permission acknowledge collaboration so you see that I have added more however this is the problem failing to meet the letter would violate academic Integrity can lead to Serious repercussion okay con resulting in what loss of trust this is one legal issues
reputational damage and plagiarism if you can really focus how can this start with loss of trust and legal issues and reputational damage these three like they are not really a problem how can this lead to loss of trust directly and what what I did actually I have changed the order of this dis plagurism and I it should supposed to be the first one because what happened if you don't site properly or paraphrase correctly the first problem that's going to occur is plagurism and after plagurism what's the repercussion of plagurism it's lost of trust legal issues
and of course uh legal issues loss of trust and legal issues so in fact if I have to really write a good introduction here this one has to be changed so resulting in for first I have to say plagurism oh sorry I have to talk play sorry sorry sorry and play jism and okay why I missed that's because I'm nervous legal issues reputation and of course finally I have to put lot of trust here this small mistake may seem like really trivial mistake it's nothing much it just changed the order but trust me changing the
order of that specific word is going really to be problematic to the whole essay because what my logic is so in order for us to be part of our Academia to be to enter Academia we need to follow censor standard these standards are 1 2 3 4 five if we don't adhere to these standards this is what's going to happen and the first thing that usually is going to happen is plagurism so plagurism legal issues reputational damage and of course loss of TR trust and always remember if you put a list and this is the
idea behind this video If you provide kind of a list make sure that that you have a very good logic a Sound Logic to why you have ordered that list the way you did this is very very important and why because later when you are going to develop this that order is going to help you so if for example in this case we are you are going to start with for first you talk about what what does it mean by citing properly paraphrasing or even start with the idea that what is someone else idas creative
output then how to site paraphrase correctly then you are going to add another paragraph maybe and adding talking about what happened if you don't do this that's plagiarism and what happened after plagiarism maybe you are going to face legal issues maybe after which you have reputational damage and loss of trust I tried my best to sum up like this important idea please tell me in the comment section also what you want to know about academic writing so thank you so much see you next video byebye
