[Music] all right so we'll do another lead example um let's see what do we want to do next here how about one for law of attraction why not let's do that i move my face back to over here again so this is a law of attraction offer i wrote during my alliance publishing days um i don't think that this offer ended up really crushing it but i also don't know how much it saw the light of day to be completely honest with you because with me promoting so many offers for these guys it was kind
of like i'm not promoting but writing um it was kind of like some of this stuff um would get tested on like a few hundred clicks and if it didn't immediately smash they would just kind of put it to the side and not come back to it but there's some elements i really like in this lead but there's also some things where i kind of wonder about changes i could have made as well so what i'm going to do we'll go through the lead here uh notice the last lead was was 500 ish words this
one's 772. none of these leads can be super long um and yet you know for the most part everything these examples i'm sharing a lot of them did extremely well and so it's kind of just a good reminder of that you don't need to like the least shouldn't be two thousand words in fact a lot of them uh [Music] can really just be a couple hundred words or whatever so anyway this one here um let's just read it and it'll come back and we'll kind of talk about what i like about it and where it
matches up with this and everything like that right so what if i told you that there was a secret code hidden deep inside einstein's theory of relativity and that once you discover it you can have literally anything in the universe you want i really do mean anything total financial security so that you never again get mailbox anxiety because you're afraid of the bills you might find inside or pass relentless nights wondering where the money will come from after being ambushed by a surprise expense you simply can't afford to pay stronger more deeply rewarding relationships with
your friends family and romantic partner and perfect perfect health for decades to come both for yourself and all those you love it might sound unbelievable but there are more than 14 000 people across america experiencing these exact things at this very moment and even more profoundly they are doing it using a hidden and bizarre power something that famous physicists and mathematician albert einstein identified more than a century ago and that he claimed was the key to all his success and success in life hi my name is luke bernard in next five minutes i'm going to
give you the incredibly powerful but long suppressed secret to obtain anything you want in this role whether it's material something like a beautiful vacation home on the beach a meticulously well-appointed luxury sedan that's so new you feel intoxicated by the smell of fine leather every time you open the driver's side door or just the peace of mind that comes from knowing you have more money coming in than you can possibly spend and that all your financial needs will be forever taken care of or whether it's emotional like the feeling of total well-being and inner peace
when you wake up every morning i've never been struggling with feelings of depression or anxiety i've never again worrying about the events in life that used to be out of your control or whether it's spiritual something as profound as enjoying a deep connection with both god and the unseen but clearly present power that fills our universe or even if it's all the above in a lot of ways the staggeringly powerful mind harnessing technique i'm about to teach you is the missing ingredient what's commonly known as the law of attraction it's the part that the creators
of the secret purposely left out and that virtually every other positive thinking guru still doesn't want you to know about they want you to fail because the more you struggle to truly manifest the things in your life that you desire the more you'll keep buying their books their cds and tickets to their trainings and seminars now i know it's a strong charge but i'll give you the damning proof for that claim right inside this video in fact that's really what this short but highly controversial presentation you're now watching is all about proof proof that your
mind is exponentially more powerful than you've ever imagined proof that it can bring you more wealth greater health stronger relationships and more spiritual fulfillment than you ever thought possible and proof that all it takes to harness this power inside your mind is your commitment to spend about seven minutes per day performing a certain set of simple mental actions things that anyone of any age can do in which i'll describe to you in explicit detail in just a second before i do that however there's one extremely important thing you need to understand the secret mind techniques
i'm about to give you will create a vortex something that sucks up everything in existence you want and then gently drops it at your front door but please understand this is not based on positive thinking it's also not based on the power of intention or even an abundance mentality it's certainly not based on the principles you learned in the secret or even on the law of attraction at least on the form that you're familiar with instead what you're about to be shown is based on a fundamentally basic principle in modern physics something that albert einstein
both identified and used himself in order to achieve unimaginable wealth and fame while contributing to the betterment of humanity and that he's so beautifully summed up when he wrote in his private journal that imagination is everything is a preview of life's coming attractions okay so are you ready to discover exactly what the secret life changing method is then let's get started like i just mentioned my name is luke bernard i'm 41 years old and live just outside raleigh north carolina all right so a lot going on here um i generally don't like starting leads with
questions i don't like the whole like uh if then or you know like are you always feeling tired that or what if i could told you uh so i did it in this case but like it's not if i was gonna go back and write this again i don't know if i would start with a question on it uh i i like the idea of a secret code hidden deep inside einstein's theory of relativity i like this stuff right about not getting mailbox anxiety because you're afraid of the bills you might find inside or passing
restless nights wondering where the money will come from after being ambushed by a surprise expense you can't simply or you simply can't afford i think that stuff's pretty like real uh i like this stuff and i'm saying a lot i like this stuff i wonder about you know with the friends family and romantic partner the one thing there is like what if they don't have a romantic partner and that's what they really want which is actually pretty common with law of attraction stuff so i wonder if maybe i could have called that out better here
perfect health for decades to come is a strong claim but it's okay 14 000 people across america is going to be some of the credibility we'll come back to this in a minute the einstein stuff is kind of interesting this whether it's material whether it's emotional whether it's spiritual is good the flow is a little weird i like the painting the picture going back to like not saying like a new car but like a meticulously well-appointed luxury sedan that's so new you feel intoxicated by the smell of fine leather every time you open the driver's
side door right that's way better than get a new car um i could have done the same thing with a beautiful vacation home on the beach right it's like i could have done something like um beach like where you leave the windows open each night and the warm tropical salty air you know caresses you in the morning as you wake i mean you could just take it a level deeper and frankly that would make it better i think so i mean same thing with the emotional and spiritual stuff this idea here i really like this
of um what i'm about to teach you is the missing ingredient to what's commonly known as the law of attraction i kind of wonder and then well this part about it's the part that the creators of the secret purposely left out i think those two things i don't know if they've been done before and again this was written back in 2014 or so these two might have been better hooks than the albert einstein hook it may have been better if the albert einstein thing was a secondary hook but the big thing was like you know
maybe like if you've ever seen the secret you probably know that it didn't get what you what you wanted and the reason why it has to do with this one part which is like the the secret chapter the one part that they left out um but don't worry it's not you know from until now it's been hidden from the rest of the world but today that changes um you know this is a little harsh if they want you to fail but interesting um so but i just think these ones could have maybe been better hooks
for things to play with and lend themselves to good headlines the einstein stuff was interesting to me and i love that quote from einstein later on about how he's using attraction but yeah that's something i'm thinking about here the stuff here about should i come back up here this staggeringly powerful mind harnessing technique i'm about to use i don't mind harnessing technique is like kind of i don't think i don't think that adds anything i think i think it it increases confusion so if i was gonna redo this today i probably would not have used
mine harnessing technique i would say in a lot of ways i'm about to show you or what i'm about to teach you kept it blinder i don't think i needed mind harnessing technique in there um i could have kept it blind or the copy is what i'm saying and then you know all the proof all you need to do is commit about so much per day performing a certain set of simple mental actions things that anyone of any age can do i feel like i don't even need that for this one i think again it
could have been blinder you know if you're going to spend about seven minutes per day um concentrating at least 50 giving concentrating at least 50 percent we're saying like i think maybe that would have been better than a certain set of simple mental actions it's kind of broad and vague so i don't know if that is really needed i love this idea of like the secret mind techniques i'm about to give you will create a vortex something that sucks up everything in existence you want and then gently drop set it's from at your front door
i think this is a great copy um like maybe it could have been you just put up a little bit higher and then of course the contrary itself right this is not positive thinking power of intention even abundance mentality it's not based on what you learned in the secret or even the law of attraction um it's based on a fundamental principle of modern physics something albert einstein identified and used himself see i think this is good but this is probably where einstein could have come in here i don't know if i needed einstein all the
way up as like the main hook versus the missing thing the one thing that they people who wrote the secret didn't tell you or the one part that nobody ever tells you about the law of attraction or something i think that could have potentially been a more interesting hook but if you go to all right go back to the outline calling out the problem um scroll down here i mean oh duh right well here we're making promises but really caught the problem too with the mailbox anxiety restless nights worrying about where the money will come
from things like that promising solution you definitely you know having anything in the universe you want stronger deeper all this stuff is probably seeing the solution so we have plenty of that going on we don't use an emotional discovery story and probably we tease albert einstein's discovery but it's not emotional i wonder if you know teasing the speaker luke's story may have been uh may have improved things teasing the unique mechanism we definitely do that with the einstein stuff in physics and kind of like um a hidden power saying that einstein identified contrary nature we
do do that we talk about all the things that it's not right not based on this not based on this not based on this fascinations i mean maybe i not in the classic sense but you know the stuff about what einstein um kind of used is kind of a good fascination there addressing skepticism yeah we did that a couple of times obviously it's the 14 000 people have used it i'm going to give you proof [Music] so yeah we just skepticism credibility builders i you know albert einstein i guess 14 000 people who this works
for yeah we do like no matter what you want whether it's emotional or physical or spiritual and we don't have testimonials on this one and then right after that again comes right into the background story who am i right like my name's luke bernard so yeah i don't know i think there's some cool stuff in this one but i can see where i could have made it better with the advantage of i mean six years of hindsight so hopefully uh that's instructive to you and let me uh let me move on to yet another one
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